To me, the kids (Jem, Scout, and Dill) are fascinated with the house because kids are, by nature, fascinated with the unknown and potentially dangerous.To me, the kids (Jem, Scout, and Dill) are fascinated with the house because kids are, by nature, fascinated with the unknown and potentially dangerous.To me, the kids (Jem, Scout, and Dill) are fascinated with the house because kids are, by nature, fascinated with the unknown and potentially dangerous.The kids Jem, scout and dill are fascinated by the house because kids by nature, like the unknown.
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February 25, 2015 at 7:19 am
Kaine
Your topic sentence is clear and effective.
Targets
1) Remove the repetition
2) always use at least one supporting quotation
3) develop your opinion